Toffel essay TYPE_1...plzz check it
The article states about the core curriculum that is a sequence of thematically focused interdisciplinary courses that are obligatory for all students. The article provides reasons of support. However, the professor explain that core curriculum is to be changed and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that core curriculum are designed to develop the students skills. The professor refutes this point by saying that core curriculum is designed only for undergraduates to understand the discipline.
Second, the article posits that core curriculum have reaped rich rewards. However, the professor says that this courses have a big class size. He states that which do not improve the students performance, not even his public profile.
Third, the article says that the intellectual challenge provided by these courses. The professor opposes this by saying that this courses are very easy and students get nothing form reading this type of courses. This courses are not more than a summer internship.
In conclusion, the professor points refuted the article and made clear that core curriculum is not a good idea to be adopted by the colleges.
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the professor explain that
the professor explains that
Sentence: First, the reading claims that core curriculum are designed to develop the students skills.
Description: The fragment that core curriculum is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: However, the professor says that this courses have a big class size.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and courses
Sentence: The professor opposes this by saying that this courses are very easy and students get nothing form reading this type of courses.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and courses
Sentence: This courses are not more than a summer internship.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to This and courses
Sentence: The article states about the core curriculum that is a sequence of thematically focused interdisciplinary courses that are obligatory for all students.
Error: thematically Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Words: 185 250
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 185 250
No. of Characters: 962 1200
No. of Different Words: 95 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.688 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.2 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.743 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.575 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.404 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.668 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4