Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
children should be disciplined but not by smacking them . parents think that if we smack the child he would learn discipline fast, but it is not the case. they forget that the generation today are not tolerant and they might either not listen to you or take you for granted . Infact they might take any drastic step too which you would have not imagined.
so now the parents should realize that smacking is not the solution , but make the child realize his mistakes by reaching out to him or her , talking to them , understanding them and making them also understanding your point of view. we as adultas also make mistakes so they are just children.Infact there are counsellors who can help parents tos ort their child problems. today in most cases both parents are working , so there is little tme for them to spend with the child. they should take out time and spend time with their childre, take them out on weekends, tell them stories, set examples to them , make them realise what is right or wrong.
In THIS I think there would be much healhier relationshiip between the child and the parent.they will be able to speak out their heart.smacking will only worsen the situation . they will feel dejected , depressed and many other pscycological conditions would pop up. children are our fututre and we should nuithrture w, care ith love and naffectio
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- In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 56
- Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75641025641 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58339212747 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2359720973 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.181818182 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869277008475 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435003391169 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380229183815 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685605282338 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422086396325 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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