In many countries, more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays there is an increasing number of people are fond of buying household electrical appliances, such as television, microwave oven and rice cooker. this phenomenon both have advantages and disadvantages, and I think it have more positive effects than negative effects.
There is no denying that too many electrical devices would waste a lot of electric power, especially for those appliances which need power supply continuously, such as air conditions and refrigerators. these wastes is approximately occurred in every family. Furthermore, people really like to buy kinds of appliances, especially when new patterns come out, residents would like to replace the old ones as new ones. that is not only led to waste money but also generate new rubbish, which is not friendly to the environment.
However, the positive development of buying household cannot be ignored. buying households by people may represent citizens are more care about their life quality than before, in old days many people are worrying about survival so they couldn't afford to other things except food. In addition, appliances give a life easy way for nowadays' citizen, with supported by high technology, people's life are more convenient and comfortable. economy is increased by people's consume, our society is built on economical currents, consumers' purchasing is essential part. when people would like to afford appliances means this country's economy is in a good condition.
To sum up, although some people are arguing that buying wide range of households may bring power waste and environmental harmful, advanced technology may resolve these problems. In my opinion, I think buying households is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47547169811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95627564373 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.449381313 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346732831715 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107438857425 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774673625415 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200707357836 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100242447282 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.