While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing envinronmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforeststation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In reality, environment is mainly polluted by human activities. A group of people suppose that the most major problem with the Earth now is increasing global temperatures. While to others, destroying forest is a more negatively causing to the environment.
On the one hand, there is an opinion that the gist environmental polluted issue is global warming. In fact, when the temperature of the Earth becomes hotter and hotter, it promotes the ice in Antarctica melted. Due to that, there are plenty of both humans and animal species losing accommodation because of rising sea level.
On the other hand, humans are destroying thousands forest area affecting environment. It is true to say that forests are the green lungs of the Earth because trees absorb measure of CO2 and produce O2 which people and animals use to breathe, to survive. Due to that, cutting a variety of trees could rise CO2 trapping into our environment.
In conclusion, nowadays, the environment is seriously polluted by humans. It is hard to define what is the mainly issue which we have to solve. It could be like deforestation, global warming or other thousands problems existing up to now.
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing envinronmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforeststation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Restricing air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. Do you agree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...and produce O2 which people and animals use to breathe, to survive. Due to that, cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01030927835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85916641822 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5214797643 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161530230402 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537047286986 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487765790269 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979425959911 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481656492421 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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