Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Choices plays a crucial role in every one’s life, be it good or bad. Of late, a few people are of the opinion the current generation are having a lot of varieties to pick and choose from. I totally agree that people have a myriad number of options to select from.
The most compelling reason to validate my current stance in favour of several preferences enjoyed by the people of today. Nowadays simply people have immense amount of choices. And this kind of variety seems to highly please a consumerist society. Previously people had two or three kinds of picks to make, but in today’s era simply you name it, and you can have it. Nonetheless only if; you have the finances to support your cravings. For example, in the range of Apple I Phones itself there is a series of models available in varied colours, each one comes with a set of unique features as well as it comes with different price tag. So, if you know your needs than all you need to do is to pay it online or in cash and avail of the product at your convenience. Hence the available variety of goods seems to meet everyone’s requirement to the tee.
Another valid reason to substantiate my claim, that agrees that nowadays we have got multiple options to choose for be it in the sector of education, careers. In the section of services to, online banking, net banking or even personal banking as well as even up to the death of the person if he would like to opt for organ donation, burial or even a cremation. This all is possible due to the phenomenal technological and even scientific development that too at a rapid pace. For instance, as compared to the yesteryears there was entertainment in the form of radio and televisions but nowadays internet, theatre, cinema, stand-up comedy shows, game shows etc. are available. So of course we lead a convenient as well as an eventful life thanks to the vast range of choices.
To sum up my exposition. I would like to further add to the fact that nowadays a bountiful amount of varied options has eased our life as it comes with multiple selections compared to the archaic times which came with very few options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...imply you name it, and you can have it. Nonetheless only if; you have the finances to suppo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ail of the product at your convenience. Hence the available variety of goods seems to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, you know, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60677083333 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66150292485 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5064652002 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2777777778 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233776183625 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625840101004 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054170204966 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118876095638 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422935208062 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.