Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter, with respect to the nomination form i came across recently for the community help award.
This a medium is to show appreciation to individuals who has helped the community in one way or the other, I would love to nominate Mrs Peterson. She's one of the few individuals that has made tremendous impact on the community of Arcadia.
Mrs Peterson was the pioneered of the recently constructed play ground at the intersection between park road and center street. she single handedly drew the plan, and organized the logistics. Moreover, she has been very helpful in keeping the environment clean, she helps with the monitoring of the disposal waste system and helps in cases or overcharged bill. Mrs Peters also facilitated the renovation of bad road on hills street.
It's without doubt that she has been a consistent helper of this community having a good standing record. I think she deserves the good standing award. This won't only appreciate her, it would encourage every other member of this community.
Yours Faithfully
Eniola
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on between park road and center street. she single handedly drew the plan, and orga...
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...enovation of bad road on hills street. Its without doubt that she has been a co...
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...ovation of bad road on hills street. Its without doubt that she has been a consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, i think, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7245277967 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1088710938 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177194611339 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626212763738 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598086569783 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109338327198 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661335597351 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.