Some inhabitants think that divorce is a worst choice if life. Whereas others think opposite. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give explanation

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Some inhabitants think that divorce is a worst choice if life. Whereas others think opposite. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give explanation

Gracious family! No one reject that they have willingness to make a gracious family which consists of the humble father, the buoyant mother and the blissful children. Unfortunately, some families choose to end up their togetherness by taking a divorce. I personally disagree with it.

Divorcing is a word that make people squeak because they will separate with their husbands or wives also children. In the past, divorce was unacceptable for all social background's people. It was considered to be embarrassing for a family. The divorce family might be abandoned from their society. Furthermore, di...

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No one reject that
No one rejects that

Sentence: They can have dramatically trauma by seeing their separated parents.
Description: The fragment have dramatically trauma is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dramatically with adjective

Sentence: In this modern era, divorce is common and more socially acceptable for mostly people.
Description: The fragment for mostly people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace mostly with adjective

divorcing is not good choice for screws families
divorcing is not a good choice for screwing families

to their children by take care them fidelity.
to their children by taking care them fidelity.

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