In the present day,globalization is playing important roles in our lives.But in the mean whether it is blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate.some people argue that globalization has a fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives,while many other contend that has a detrimental effect as well.
The advantages and disadvantages of globalization has been a controversial issue in the socities lately. While some people argue that globalization have several benefits, others maintain that it has detrimental effects. Although both sides have significant concrete justifications, I strongly believe that globalization has important risky and disadvantages that shouldn't be ignored. I will elucidate some of my point of support in the following paragraphes.
Firstly, I want to explain economically disadvantages. some countries are underdeveloped in the world economy so they need to developed country for a prosperity and creating some job area. underdeveloped countries do not have great welfare; school, road , hospital, etc. For that reason, they need to developed country but I think they have to do alone, they must not be dependent other country. Their government must work very well and think their community's future. dependent economy cause a crisis, like a currency crisis in Turkey. this country need a currency in nowadays. İt is not a good circumstance for a Turkish people. A country must be stand in a world economy like developed countries did it.
Secondly I want to speak about environmentally. globalization warming has a risky level in these days. this is because the petrol and other minerals. petrol is an important material for global economy and production. countries product and sell other country for profit their economy. country must be product their needs. Airplane has a huge carbon footprint for that globalization warming increasing. but some people argue that globalization has advantages and important roles in our lives. Yes important roles in our lives but it has not a advantages for human and animal life. İt it offer a dependent life for country and its people.
İt is hard to say all of risky but economically and environmentally disadvantages most important items for me. countries affect their easily, it is not nice opinion. I must live independent other country, I do not care with their money and product. I am care with my country. my other opinion is environmentally risky. globalization cause a global warming. I want to take a good breathe and I want to swim clean sea. I want to see fish, bear, etc. globalization take away from me and another people.
To sum up, I claim that globalization important in our lives but it should not be. countries should developed alone like developed countries. countries decision should not affect other countries easily, it is not a nice situation. The world all of us so we do not need to country, we are just human but if we have a country we should make a decision on our own for our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14319637684 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443438914027 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.312278368 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4722222222 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2777777778 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107328770044 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329596072888 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711750936354 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710728226591 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519992375001 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.