Students today can easily access information online. So libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
This is the era of technology. In the edge of the internet, all the information is available on the click of the button. Owing to the advent of the internet, the use of libraries are very rare. Very handful of people nowadays use libraries for their reading and research purposes. Some people tend to believe that public libraries are not necessary anymore, while others disagree. In the following essay, I will check both perspectives and provide an opinion in the conclusion.
To begin with, the internet is easily available. It is very convenient to search for any information on it. Any hours of the day people can browse and read any educational material. unlike libraries, there is no opening or closing hours for internet browsing. Owing to the state of the art search engine algorithms, searching is easier on the internet. On the other hand, the search for information in libraries is quite harder than the internet. It is possible that some reading materials could not be found in the library. For instance, the numbers of copies of books are limited, people might have to wait for a while to get the same book. Whereas on the internet everything is virtual, a number of people can use the same e-book at the same time.
Evidently, the maintenance of libraries is costlier and time-consuming.
On the other hand, anyone can post anything on the internet so there is no credibility of the information. Even today there are millions of people, can not afford the internet or do not know how to use it. For them, libraries are the best source of information. Moreover, libraries can provide ambience and environment where people can read peacefully. It has been observed that many students can only focus on the peaceful environment of libraries. Public libraries contain a range of literature in regional languages which are not easily available on the internet.
In conclusion, I believe that public libraries have many advantages over the internet. Though, all the information available on the internet nowadays but it cannot replace libraries. Libraries are an integral part of the social and educational infrastructure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 965.302439024 186% => OK
No of words: 355.0 196.424390244 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05070422535 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89243244405 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47323943662 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 283.868780488 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 8.94146341463 280% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4886700398 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.72 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173778062495 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513801034947 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367375464477 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101283119618 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659391582344 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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