In some countries, children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Strong rules regarding the mannerism of adolescents have been imposed by few nations, while other countries have given freedom to do whatever they want. Owing to this, children should obey the laws which are made for their betterment and overall development. This essay will scrutinize both the viewpoints with a plausible conclusion.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits and drawbacks when children are free to do anything l. Firstly, it will assist to take their decisions independently as they have the freedom of choice. As a result, they will become autonomous because they do not have to rely on anyone for any decision.For example, youngsters of the USA are more mature as compared to other nations because they are permitted to do anything they like. However, sometimes it may cause catastrophic implications due to lack of awareness regarding the consequences. To exemplify, a boy in New York complained against his parents and due to this act, his parents got arrested because there are no laws in America which can stop the children to do it. Therefore, some rules should be levied by the authorities to curb the perilous ramifications.
On the other hand, strict rules will guide children what is right and wrong. This is because laws will not be infringed by them due to the knowledge of guidelines and they will behave in an appropriate manner. For instance, youngsters under eighteen years are not allowed to drive in India, therefore, every young person has to follow this rule because it is beneficial for them as well as for the society to reduce road rages. In addition to that, there are also manifold rules which hinder the development of the adolescents. These regulations should not be followed by them. To illustrate, in many middle east countries, learning a foreign language is banned by their respective governments which is not a good thing. Therefore, there must have some equilibrium between freedom and laws that are followed by children.
By agglomerating above mentioned factors, it is concluded that maturity, as well as deleterious effects, could be the possible outcomes when freedom is rendered to adolescents, though a good mannerism and sometimes it becomes an obstacle for the development cannot be neglected. Furthermore, it is recommended that before implementing any rules on children governments should circumspect all the facets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1675257732 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94352351681 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8772787297 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.388888889 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356402837104 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104951380529 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882951638559 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211842699236 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818695225329 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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