Nowadays, some inhabitants chose to send their old parents to nursing home. Whereas, others believe that children should take care their parents appropriately. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
“Being older is certain, being mature is choice”
The quote above reminds me that I will become old someday. Being old could not be delayed by the best medicine ever. That is why, as a children, we should give the best attention to the elderly people. This is similar like the attention that they gave to us when we were child. Unfortunately, some inhabitants prefer to send their elderly to nursing home because they did not have time enough for caring them. I personally disagree with this statement.
When I was young, I could run faster than today. When I look into my grandmother, I und...
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Sentence: This is similar like the attention that they gave to us when we were child.
Description: A verb 'to be', past tense, 2nd person singular or all is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to were and child
entence: Moreover, some elderly get specific sickness named Dementia where they cannot remember what they have done before.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to elderly and get
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