You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter as an acknowledgement feedback after receiving new bank card on last week.
After receiving my new bank card, I got very disappointed as there is no ATM card inside the envelop KIT.
I have requested for this last month and It took 2 week to process on same. However, I am deeply worried if some one has stolen or missed anywhere after it has been disbursed from bank.I have to pay the fees for my Son`s college by this month end.
Apparently, I wont be able to collect money from ATM till I receive my new card.
Hence, I kindly request you to probe on same and resend me the new ATM card along with new pin as soon as possible.
In addition to it, also requesting you to expedite process on deactivating that missed ATM to avoid misuse.
I hope to have you informed sufficiently in this regards and look forward for your prompt response once new card dispatched.
Your sincerely
Gowri Shankar K
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ppointed as there is no ATM card inside the envelop KIT. I have requested for this last mo...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ested for this last month and It took 2 week to process on same. However, I am deepl...
^^^^
Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...n same. However, I am deeply worried if some one has stolen or missed anywhere after it ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e after it has been disbursed from bank.I have to pay the fees for my Son's ...
^
Line 10, column 72, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ATM) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...probe on same and resend me the new ATM card along with new pin as soon as possible....
^^^^
Line 11, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vating that missed ATM to avoid misuse. I hope to have you informed sufficiently...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...pe to have you informed sufficiently in this regards and look forward for your promp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56896551724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57489864886 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649425287356 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6379766187 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325777417065 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123669653664 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565191558881 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147100054336 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513707274546 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.