Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter as an acknowledgement after receiving new bank card.
Unfortunately the received ATM kit has no ATM card inside which made me very disappointed on yesterday.
I have requested for this last month and It took 2 weeks to process on same. However, I am deeply worried if some one has stolen or missed anywhere after it has been disbursed from bank.
I have to pay the fees for my Son`s college by this month end. Apparently, I wont be able to collect money from ATM until I receive my new card.
Hence, I kindly request you to probe on same and resend me the new ATM card along with new pin as soon as possible.
In addition to it, also requesting you to expedite process on deactivating that missed ATM.
I hope to have you informed sufficiently in this regards and look forward for your prompt response once new card has been dispatched.
Your sincerely
Gowri Shankar K
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...n same. However, I am deeply worried if some one has stolen or missed anywhere after it ...
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Line 10, column 72, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ATM) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...probe on same and resend me the new ATM card along with new pin as soon as possible....
^^^^
Line 11, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rocess on deactivating that missed ATM. I hope to have you informed sufficiently...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...pe to have you informed sufficiently in this regards and look forward for your promp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63473053892 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68664157565 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1486647922 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302493232259 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106661477755 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666739089134 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135653187517 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709229659361 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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