The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today’s world?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Invention of computers completely changed the human's life. It has had a remarkable influence on everything that human is dealing with them. One of the most significant causes of this revolution is the Internet. Internet makes the world smaller, and every one can access anything in anytime without any limitations and borders, and this ability is the result of accessing the information through internet become easier than before.
The most important effect of availability of information in today's world is making the learning process easier, that everyone can learn anything. A rural child can...
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Sentence: More information increase the number of Scientifics and inventions, which leads the human's life to a more convenient condition.
Description: The fragment information increase the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increase with verb, past tense
Sentence: It leads the humankind to a better life, making everything possible and anyone can acquire anything he can imagines.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to can and imagines
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