Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Art is a combination of creativity and skills. Art play vital role in human’s life, also art helps to think uniquely that all the surrounding things around us are example of art. Creativity comes in life from our childhood, where child gets nurtured during there early ages of first 12 years of their life. So, there are both views whether or not art is important subject for children at school.
On the positive side, art classes during the school time helps children to find their hobby in their early stages of life. In addition, art classes reduce stress of children's study. If they get classes and guideline while they learn new things then they would find art classes interesting, that leads them to become great artist in future. Adaptability of 5 to 12-year child are very high in contrast to young people, sometimes they adept things simple by just observing them. In research done by Harvard university that, 2 to 12-year-old child can learn more than 2 language in 1 year of span, also they learn simultaneously without putting any extra efforts. To learn same thing by any adult they needed 2-3 years with give extra time for practicing it. Art like drawing, crafting, writing, reading, solving puzzles helps to think children differently that will help them to create and solve problem efficiently in their adult life.
In terms of art is a waste time, if children get no chance to explore their area of interest will get depress during school/college time. Also, one research from Stanford university show that, students who not take part in art class, find studying other subject boring and hard to understand.
In conclusion, there is not even a single benefit of not putting art as a subject of children during school time. For century's world got lot more benefits from artists then scientist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...of their life. So, there are both views whether or not art is important subject for children a...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that leads them to become great artist in future. Adaptability of 5 to 12-year child are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91909385113 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52979646044 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3168561385 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238577445779 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912561743148 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851714058986 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157104629073 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338656691488 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.