Nowadays, global warming has become an undisputed fact about our current livelihoods. However, human’s activities have caused and made worse this phenomenon, by technology revolutionized this problem could be diminished or even vanished in some areas. In this essay the effective solution with regard to worldwide warming’s causes will be discussed.
Firstly, in nearly all megacities the primary issue that a great number of governments are facing with, is pollution which is stem from fossil fuel exhaustion. A result of modern age is the over usage of vehicles that carries traffic jam, acid rain and greenhouse gases. The main solution for this matter could be decreasing the number of fossil fuel cars and alternate them with electronic means of transportation. Currently, in some countries, this plan has implanted and the level of air pollution has a significant changes. In some developing nations with poor economics, the best affordable scheme would be sharing cars and telecommuting.
Secondly, it is inevitable that deforestation has become the most prevalent human activities for making lumber or paper. Trees are the main resources for storing enormous amount of carbon and removing it from the air. Therefore, with the destruction of forest, not only losing the natural air-scrubbing function of trees but also decreasing biodiversity. The electronic devices such as laptop, iPad and computer plays a pivot role due to this problem because many paper books has been replacing with eBooks and in recent years most of pupils’ assignments are controlled over internet and with electronic version by their teachers.
In conclusion, global warming is caused by various items such as fossil fuel emission and deforestation as a result of technology. The given suggestions are electronic vehicles and digital books and we will be surely doomed for disaster if we don’t make an effort for solving the mentioned problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45214521452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03759120354 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4175976978 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155829397415 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568491182317 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747380904189 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106404312032 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967109252044 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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