I utterly agree with the concept that people get to learn more from individuals on their own level rather than those in higher ones. The reasons why I believe this way is their resembling conditions, the competition among them as well as the freedom and more comfort they have in their friendships with them.
First, I think that the similarity and the equals of the peoples' conditions and problems in an issue plays an important role in them being closer and influential on each other. The more we get to feel closer with our friends or colleagues, the more our problems that we are struggling with get to be alike, we even feel more than we should spend time together and ask for advice and consult with them. We all have this notion that experiences are good to learn from regardless of the fact whose it is and it is our friends that we choose to gain more knowledge and insight toward issues than others.
Furthermore, we always compete and compare ourselves with people who are on our level. The concept and the consensus that we must be better than others in our level makes it more competing for us to learn and imitate from each other. This event is vivid through social media. Different people from different countries all are trying to imitate from the famous and renown social media super start in order to prove to their rivals that they are better and nothing like them. The more that time passes the more people are trying to copy killed Jenner and other social media superstars. they inspire from her makeup styles to her day to day clothing and brands she uses.
At last one of the basis of the productive close friendships is the fact that the friends get to feel comfortable with each other and feel like fear won't interupt their interactions and friendship. Our bosses and other from higher ranks and working positions are people who we should be careful when talking to, correcting mistakes or even trying to make a suggestion. But with people from our levels, we get to be our selves and every suggestion, recommendation or proposals are true and the parties get to really benefit from each other's opinions instead of faking around each other.
In conclusion, people like our bosses, mentors or even our teachers are perfect for learning from but in the end, it is our friends that we learn from more. the similarity between the conditions and the ongoing competition among people with the same level are two of the important reasons why we get to learn more from our friends. Moreover, the attitudes that we have toward people from higher levels are unintentionally so different from the one to our friends which strongly affects our relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46519345218 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440170940171 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1952539416 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.882352941 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5294117647 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2161040658 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908274219182 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755184935849 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149608940973 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643373357997 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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