The graph above displays the record different temperatures and rainfall quantity of Kolkata city for year-round period. The temperature is measured in Celsius with 10 units interval while the rainfall is measured in millimeters from 0 with 50mm unit interval.
The Kolkata city have warmth climate through out the year, where its lowest recorded temperature is 20oC in December while its warmest temperature is about 30oC of May. The temperature rises February after it drops to 20oc during the months of December and January, and the temperature slowly rises up from February till may before its starts to fluctuate till October when its starts to fall steadily till December it hist its lowest point.
On the other, the city experience the least rainfall quantity during the months of November to April when the rainfall quantity then suddenly starts to go up before the city receives its largest of amount of rainfall through out the year from July to October.
In conclusion, when the rainfall starts to hit its highest rate through out the year, the temperature drops down slightly from 30oc to roughly around 25oc which shows how rainfall quantity affects during the rainy season of the year.
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. 67
- The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...meters from 0 with 50mm unit interval. The Kolkata city have warmth climate throug...
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.... The Kolkata city have warmth climate through out the year, where its lowest recorded tem...
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...rmest temperature is about 30oC of May. The temperature rises February after it dro...
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Suggestion: throughout
...eives its largest of amount of rainfall through out the year from July to October. In conc...
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...rainfall starts to hit its highest rate through out the year, the temperature drops down sl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07070707071 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49613516177 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2218052935 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16501430144 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970615790184 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370703881613 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108387082529 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016411550087 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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