The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports tn the UK in 2010sportsBoys 6-11Boys 12-16football 87 78basketball35 25cricket 45 34rugby

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The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports tn the UK in 2010
sports Boys 6-11 Boys 12-16
football 87 78
basketball 35 25
cricket 45 34
rugby 23 21
swimming 19 19

The table gives information about the proportion of male students in two different age groups who took part in five sports in the United Kingdom in the year 2010.
Overall, boys aged 6 to 11 participated more of each sport than that in boys between 12 and 16 years old almost all sports surveyed. Another visible trend is that, both surveyed groups recorded the same data in swimming.
The percentage of male students in both groups joining in football reached a peak, at 87% in 6- to 11-year-old boys and at 78% in the remaining group. 35% of boys aged 6 to 11 participated in basketball, compared with 25% of boys between 12 and 16 years old. Cricket was much more preferred by younger boys than by older boys. The figures were 45% and 34% respectively.
The proportion of school-aged boys playing rugby in the younger group was 23% in the year 2010. The figure for the older group was lower, at 21%. However, the same rate in swimming was seen in two age groups, at 19%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...younger group was 23% in the year 2010. The figure for the older group was lower, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55367231638 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52693366052 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2592664221 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298470567424 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1105645194 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691956577072 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183856146133 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208962488161 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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