A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter1 give contact details for when you are away2 give instructions about how to care for your pet3 describe other household duties.

Dear Sam,

I hope you are doing well, once again thank you so much for agreeing to look after my dog, the snoopy and my house for few
days. As we discussed earlier, it's is an inescapable holiday for me to postpone later. At the same time even family also went
to their native place for summer vacation. I hope I'm not troubling you much.

As soon as, I arrive my destination I will share my contact details, In the meanwhile you can use my what'sup number for any
information you required. I'll give instructions how to take care of my snoopy. she has the habit of going for walk in the morning and evening and taking meals for every 5 hours intervals. I'd like to say that be ensure of taking full fledged meals or not and fill her tin with plenty of water,even in the absence of you at night she can lick water. during summer she drinks plenty of water.
Eventually take care of plants by planing water daily without failure,otherwise plants tend to wither out. These are in corridor,
and finally make sure of locking all the windows and doors properly, switch off all electrical appliances and blow only one light for security reasons.

In case, of any emergency if you would't catch up my mobile network, call to hotel reception i.e,1254-3265879.
really, I would appreciate the work you done for me.

Yours sincerely,
shiva

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my dog, the snoopy and my house for few days. As we discussed earlier, its is an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the same time even family also went to their native place for summer vacation. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tive place for summer vacation. I hope Im not troubling you much. As soon as,...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nwhile you can use my whatsup number for any information you required. Ill give...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you can use my whatsup number for any information you required. Ill give instr...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...er for any information you required. Ill give instructions how to take care of m...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: She
...ructions how to take care of my snoopy. she has the habit of going for walk in the ...
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Suggestion: I'd
...king meals for every 5 hours intervals. Id like to say that be ensure of taking fu...
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Suggestion: , even
...ot and fill her tin with plenty of water,even in the absence of you at night she can ...
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Suggestion: During
...nce of you at night she can lick water. during summer she drinks plenty of water. Ev...
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Suggestion: , otherwise
...s by planing water daily without failure,otherwise plants tend to wither out. These are in...
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Suggestion:
... In case, of any emergency if you wouldt catch up my mobile network, call to hote...
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Suggestion: Really
...l to hotel reception i.e,1254-3265879. really, I would appreciate the work you done f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d appreciate the work you done for me. Yours sincerely, shiva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, really, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64016736402 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59521505689 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690376569038 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2121163533 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2142857143 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226672092675 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762750288139 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568023333629 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077835622427 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504674737017 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.