Full time university student spend most of their time in academic subjects. Some people say that they should engage in other activities also . Do you agree or disagree?
The fue countries children are encouraged to do paid work. because their educational purposes it is the main reason. there are several benefits and drawbacks.
it is a fact that the childhood is a memorable thing in a person's life, this paid work improves child's knowledge and some work experience can be help teenagers in making a good career. First of all, some young people will go to other countries by their higher educations in this type of children more interest to do part time jobs. For example, they work in restaurants, petrol bunks. Secondly, in villages young children do forming, because they go to town and study so they get many to this process and one of the main reasons for the family back ground. can contribute to family expenditure.
Further, if children do paid work ,they will feel safer some health issues in there future and also, develop bad habits such as smoking, alcohol, drugs. however, this will be spoil their education and they will not get better job after. The job demands for higher than children's ability can cause bad effect on their mindset.
To conclude, a fue parents would choose to send their children out to full time paid work or part time jobs as helping their parents around the family home as it helps in learning responsibilities and getting work experience. however, care should be takes not to disturb their study hours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Because
...hildren are encouraged to do paid work. because their educational purposes it is the ma...
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...hildren are encouraged to do paid work. because their educational purposes it is the ma...
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...ational purposes it is the main reason. there are several benefits and drawbacks. ...
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...are several benefits and drawbacks. it is a fact that the childhood is a mem...
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...veral benefits and drawbacks. it is a fact that the childhood is a memor...
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
...the childhood is a memorable thing in a persons life, this paid work improves childs kn...
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Suggestion: part-time
...is type of children more interest to do part time jobs. For example, they work in restaur...
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...ain reasons for the family back ground. can contribute to family expenditure. ...
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...n contribute to family expenditure. Further, if children do paid work ,they ...
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... Further, if children do paid work ,they will feel safer some health issues ...
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...habits such as smoking, alcohol, drugs. however, this will be spoil their education and...
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... cause bad effect on their mindset. To conclude, a fue parents would choose ...
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Suggestion: fulltime
...ld choose to send their children out to full time paid work or part time jobs as helping ...
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Suggestion: part-time
... children out to full time paid work or part time jobs as helping their parents around th...
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Suggestion: However
...sibilities and getting work experience. however, care should be takes not to disturb th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83122362869 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49775487146 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4222812463 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0769230769 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178360154303 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059765850364 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500981818114 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108732303588 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368701912204 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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