You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to request a reference letter for applying a job which is advertised in a local newspaper. When I am reading The Hindu newspaper, I came across job advert seeking a Supervisor in the Quality Assurance department in a pharmaceutical firm named Pfizer. Fortunately, the company is looking for fresher holding a postgraduate degree passed in the year 2018.

It is well known to you that I am desperately in search of an opportunity in a multi-national company. Also, my financial situation has been deteriorating continuously and unable to cope up with the daily expenses. Moreover, it is unfair to still depend on my parents for disbursements. In addition to the above hindrances, first EMI (Equated Monthly Installment) for repayment of my educational loan is approaching, which I feel intimidating.

The advert has also mentioned that it is mandatory to bring a reference letter from their respective university tutor. Could you please provide the reference letter with details pertaining to my accomplishments, character, skills, exceptional abilities, and relationship with faculty and peers. I chivalrously request you to do this favor and will be obliged.

I look forward to receiving a positive response in this matter and urge you to assist me in achieving my debut job.

Sincerely yours,
Kumar

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, so, still, well, i feel, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26511627907 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34893410713 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641860465116 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9819574122 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189899335492 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599476917688 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601560812475 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108930571732 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474138880678 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.