Today, organizations do some works and projects in group, but group working have some advantages and disadvantages. people who work in a group and have same goals, make a team. One of the main advantage of team working is share of knowledge, expertise, and skills among group member, that the author have mentioned. However the lecturer assert that it is difficult to reach an agrement in the group. So, have different attitude toward any subject and issue is a disadvantage.
The author clarifis that team working or group, let to work be done in more quickly fashion, but the lecturer argues that the individual in group has to be motivated to have effecioncy. In the other hand, at the passage has mentioned that in the team working more creative solution will be proposed, because the risk of decision making is dispressed. While the professor discuss that because of being of people with diverse idea, the project path will be unpredictable. Also, it is difficult to convince people on the same subject. Finaly it is possibile that project be faild or ignored.
Another advantage which have discussed in the passage is the feeling of belonging to a group and cooperation in decision making, which finaly let to do work more effective. More ever, the individual team member have the chance of been shined, because a team can reach more high level results than a single individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...have some advantages and disadvantages. people who work in a group and have same goals...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...member, that the author have mentioned. However the lecturer assert that it is difficul...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70845631809 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51914893617 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6917684442 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06452816374 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247179056969 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102767545544 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625678071993 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172565139834 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616048048653 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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