The news media has become too much influence on people lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed that the news media has a great impact on people’s lives. From my point of view, going too far from its original aim of spreading accurate information to the public, the media has done more harm than good.
In fact, newspapers, television and recently online-based press has gradually played a huge part in social development. Compared with half of a century ago, the contemporary generation is now always kept well-informed of the most up-to-date information in the world thanks to the media’s advances. At any time of day or night, no matter where an individual is, that one is likely access all kinds of information, from a piece of breaking news about the USA presidential election to the chronic famine in Africa. Therefore, it is not an overstatement to say that the media has become our extended eyes and ears to open the community’s horizon.
Unfortunately, the media’s high popularity has recently accompanied many uncontrollable problems to society. Sadly, some journalists supposed to offer the truth are paid a sum under the table to make up stories and feed misleading information to readers. For example, through a photo capturing a celebrity’s party, his or her personal life is liable to be intruded then distorted to constantly immerse themselves in partying or even going wild with drugs. Moreover, the free press today allows information providers to emphasize on negative but sensational news such as crime, tragic accidents or terrorism to reach the highest consumers’ views. As an unexpected result, bad feelings from that kind of biased content might cause great distress to citizens and incite violence.
In conclusion, I must assume that although the news media plays a significant role in people’s minds and lives, it seems to be detrimental to their way of thinking. This trend requires the highest alertness to judge the accuracy of each news they read in their daily newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2429022082 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19032423976 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668769716088 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8678799428 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139056746635 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475899701203 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392218411508 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863493641777 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263902253932 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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