Topic: People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that people should keep themselves in good health merely for their own benefits, rather than as a duty to others in their community. In my opinion, it would be right to take care of a person’s health not only to derive associative benefits but also to enhance the quality of life for the society.
Firstly, I strongly believe that achieving and maintaining a good health is by far the best way to enjoy a well-rounded life. There is no question that a good physical and mental condition is one of the human’s principal capital asset which directly impacts on their inner force to cope with stress and pursue their dreams in life. By paying fully attention to self-care for the healthiness, each individual person is capable of spending more time and money on tightening their relationship knits with family and friends.
Secondly, if there were more healthy residents in a city or a country, the local authority could shift its capital investment from the medical and health-care industries to other community services to uplift the society’s living standard in general. In addition, it is said that self-care has been rising in importance as a primary method of infectious diseases prevention for the neighbourhood when it starts spreading.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people should make several attempts to reach the best health status with a view to making the most of their own lives and contributing to a healthy community around them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'diseases'' or 'disease's'?
Suggestion: diseases'; disease's
...tance as a primary method of infectious diseases prevention for the neighbourhood when i...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to a healthy community around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08097165992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90185981315 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.911211034 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.875 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240158979417 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102289586893 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994222305655 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144532984425 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1147682189 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.