You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place, you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following:
- Give details of your move.
- List items that were damaged.
- Say what you expect the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to compline about service I recently received from your company. I moved from downtown to Vesteria Lane on 21 July. I did not have a lot stuff for moving, so I just rent a trunk from your company. I packed every item, and labeled on each box. However, after moving I realize some boxes and some items were damaged.
I had some antic plates that I put on a safe box and wrote on it please move carefully. After opening box, I found some plates were broken. In addition, I found some scratch on screen of my TV. Besides, my carpet was ripped too. In addition, I had two old mirror, which broken during moving.
You can imagine how I was unhappy when I realized my lovely items were badly damaged. I think this matter deserver your urgent attention. I want you punish your careless employees who responsible for these damages. Moreover, I read your policy, since my stuffs were under guaranty, I want use insurance.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mari M.
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which broken during moving.
which are broken during moving.
this matter deserver your urgent attention.
this matter deserves your urgent attention.
who responsible for these damages.
who are responsible for these damages.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sentence: I am writing to compline about service I recently received from your company.
Error: compline Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: I think this matter deserver your urgent attention.
Error: deserver Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 177 200
No. of Characters: 760 1000
No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.294 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.238 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.673 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.45 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.216 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4