The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
Many people believe that the Internet technology, though has many benefits, has also caused a lot of problems in many societies. The following essay will discuss some major problems of the Internet usages and some of the solutions to resolve them.
For a number of reasons, the worldwide use of the Internet has been the root cause of several serious issues. Firstly, it is a fact that the online technology provides various kinds of inappropriate entertainments for its users. Thousands of adult websites are available and can be freely accessed by people from different age groups. As a result, many teenagers are addicted to obscenity these days which has impacted to their psychological condition and academic performance. Secondly, the Internet technology has caused a lot of social communication issues between families and relatives. With the existence of smartphones and tablets, people could stay online 24 hours a day as they chat with their friends or play online games in their devices. Consequently, people have less eye to eye conversations with their families and friends these days.
To resolve the first issue, parents should monitor their children's online activities. They should check regularly at their children's computer and smartphones and advise the children about the serious effect of accessing unsuitable contents to them. Parents could also make security setting for their home internet setting, whereas some adult websites will be blocked and banned. As for the second issue, it really needs the commitment of each individual and all the family members. For example, as parents need to lead by example, then they should give an example by using gadgets for a certain period of time. Another example is that all family members are not allowed to bring their own devices during meal time, therefore there will be a lot of time for eye-to-eye interaction between family members.
In conclusion, it is reported that the Internet has brought some serious issues for many communities. To address the issue, we have to be more active and aware.
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| 2019-03-09 | Saira Faiz | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21856287425 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72523022392 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.298400611 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132717523514 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461499450394 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508640003127 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102122018958 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540921275788 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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