The line graph indicates how many requirements reaching the Tourist Information Office via three methods: in person, by letter or email and by telephone in a city over a period of half a year in 2001.
Generally, the number of enquiries by letter and email fell while the trend for in person and by telephone was opposite.
The number of requests by letter and email stood at approximately 800 in January before slightly declined to about 700 in March. The next two months experienced a dramatic decrease by over 300 in the number of emails and letters for requirement. The figure then stayed statistic to the end of the period.
There was a fluctuation around 200 in the number of telephone enquiries from January to March while the figure for in-person method considerably rose from 400 to 800. In the next four months, the figure for two approaches kept increasing significantly, by 600 for telephone and 1110 for in person, making in person from the least become the most popular method to making enquiries.
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. 73
- People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? 67
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r 67
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only the governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of emails and letters for requirement. The figure then stayed statistic to the end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87931034483 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75426500002 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0383526377 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253357653597 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112235462839 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669982499412 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156413544887 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475503227287 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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