Working is an essential activity in our lives. While some people think that choosing a job with repetitive or similar task is much better and relaxing that choosing a challenging job with changing tasks. I strongly believe that people should choose challenging jobs for three compelling reasons.
Firstly, we people by human nature like challenging and new tasks in order to prove our capability and strength. In other words, we feel that we are at our best form when we challenge our brains by doing different thinks that we have not done before. Moreover, the changing in tasks increases our brain capacity and our efficiency not only at work but also in our normal life. It is also worthy to mention the satisfaction that comes in parallel with the sense of accomplishment that drives us and helps us to achieve more.
Secondly, repetitive tasks brings a lot of negative effects, such as laziness, emptiness, the sense of not improving and sometimes leads to mental issues, for instance depression. Resulting from the feeling of emptiness, depression is a common mental health problem among people who do similar tasks all day. For example, when a scenarist or a movie director needs to describe or present a depressed character they always picture it in a scene where he is always sitting in his disk, typing in his computer while other workers are moving around him energetically.
Lastly, new tasks is considered as a form of motivation for workers. It helps them unleash their creativity, sense of innovation and curiosity to learn new thinks is order to complete the task that they have been given. Some companies, mostly big and famous ones, use the strategy of switching posts among their workers. This method does not only help prevent from huge financial losses by training the workers to be polyvalent and “en garde” in case problems occur, but also helps keeping the workers active, creative and at their best shape.
All things considered, we spend a lot of our time at our work places. As a result, the nature of the tasks we do affects our health mostly mentally. Choosing a job with changing tasks is a great way to help keep our minds sharp and prevent our creativity from fading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to challenge'.
Suggestion: to challenge
...ongly believe that people should choose challenging jobs for three compelling reasons. F...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rives us and helps us to achieve more. Secondly, repetitive tasks brings a lot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63535246534 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545212765957 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1126596167 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.705882353 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182248709508 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573114867466 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445533411991 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964716728925 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439793843693 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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