Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
I am writing to let you know that I finally got a Software Engineer position in Google. I am so happy to share this news with you. As I told you earlier, my previous job was so bored to me. I kept working on fixing uncountable bugs of an existing system. Thus I started seeking new job opportunities 2 months ago.
Since I walked in Google’s office during my first interview, I immediately knew that this was my ideal work place. My major responsibility is tuning search results on several Google’s products. The most exciting thing is that my supervisor is a pioneer in this area around the world. I believe that I can get enormous cutting-edge knowledge from him.
Furthermore, I have bought a new house near my office. I sincerely invite you to come to visit next month if you are free at that point of time.
With best wishes,
Michael
- Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. You should:Describe the presentationWhy was it importantHow did it help you 56
- Universities should develop methods to support students who come from rural and disadvantageous backgrounds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. 67
- Universities should develop methods to support students who come from rural and disadvantageous backgrounds To what extent do you agree or disagree 71
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.Which viewpoint do you agree with? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...uncountable bugs of an existing system. Thus I started seeking new job opportunities...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14864864865 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31675858428 2.54303337028 170% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.743243243243 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4931857067 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956217949352 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360249451263 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325283903624 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679592299974 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558093288399 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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