You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Allow me to introduce myself. my name is Saad Mubarak and I am a 1st-year computer engineering student staying in room 1003 which I am sharing with another student. I am writing this letter in reference to inform you of the current problems I am facing with this arrangement which is effecting my work.
To elucidate my roommate invites his friends to late night parties additionally he plays loud music when I am studying and sometimes he uses my laptop without even asking my permission. I have requested him in a polite manner to stop doing such activities especially during the examination days as it affects my preparation but he rudely responds to me and ignores me completely. I have been very patient with him for the past semester but now my patience is running out due to the poor grades I received in the last semester.
Thus I would request you to either provide him with a counselling session or provide me with a separate room so that it can provide me with a peaceful environment for studying.
I look forward to an immediate response in this matter.
Yours sincerely
saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Allow me to introduce myself. my name is...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ar Sir, Allow me to introduce myself. my name is Saad Mubarak and I am a 1st-yea...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite manner" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing my permission. I have requested him in a polite manner to stop doing such activities especiall...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...es I received in the last semester. Thus I would request you to either provide h...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse in this matter. Yours sincerely saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72164948454 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78132789991 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3840370129 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213522211579 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803966647336 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101445996187 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130426830509 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101838751325 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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