The line graph demonstrates the amount money earned per week of full-time employees with a first and higher degree includes those with others qualifications different age groups in 2002.
Overall, people with others qualifications earned money rather than the other age groups throughout except in the oldest age groups (56-60 years). In contrast, people who have a first degree earned the least money since starting worked in age period 21-25 to 56-60 years old.
At presented in the graph, when started to work in age 21-25 most people earned money around 350£- over 400£. The wages of employees with other qualification increased sharply and reached a peak approximately over 800£ (age 36-40) dipped to around 720£ (age 46-50) then dropped slightly at under 700£ (age 56-60). Similarly, people with a first degree rose modately almost 700£ (age 36-40) remained stable and a few decreased uptake to rise again at age 56-60. There was a sore considerably,employees had a higher degree, untill at age 41-45 and then hit a peak almost approximately 800£ at age 56-60 respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£350'.
Suggestion: £350
...e 21-25 most people earned money around 350£- over 400£. The wages of employees wit...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400'.
Suggestion: £400
...t people earned money around 350£- over 400£. The wages of employees with other qua...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£800'.
Suggestion: £800
...y and reached a peak approximately over 800£ age 36-40 dipped to around 720£ age 46-...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£720'.
Suggestion: £720
...ly over 800£ age 36-40 dipped to around 720£ age 46-50 then dropped slightly at unde...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£700'.
Suggestion: £700
...ge 46-50 then dropped slightly at under 700£ age 56-60. Similarly, people with a fir...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£700'.
Suggestion: £700
...ith a first degree rose modately almost 700£ age 36-40 remained stable and a few dec...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , employees
...age 56-60. There was a sore considerably,employees had a higher degree, untill at age 41-4...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£800'.
Suggestion: £800
...nd then hit a peak almost approximately 800£ at age 56-60 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15340909091 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8830902609 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8635070776 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317449986101 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171929794829 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140853006934 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283588955236 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146111273991 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.