It is thought by some people foreign language is beneficial for teenagers to learn in primary school rather then secondary school. Having foreign language would certainly aid students to gain more knowledge and help to go other countries. But there will also be some drawbacks.
One evident benefit to having foreign language is that it would help to gain more knowledge of the particular countries culture. In other words, if students learn an English language the can get deep knowledge about English language. For example, students gain not only knowledge about pronouns but also vocabulary too. Another reason is that foreign language would be advantageous,that it would help to survive in other nations. If students masters foreign language so they can easily go to abroad for their further studies and living their luxurious lifestyle.
On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to having foreign language. Firstly, students lost their originality. Furthermore, if student attract the foreign language they have lose their culture. As a result, it May direct impact to the origin of the country to decrease their value as well as status too.
In conclusion, while there are more minus points to having foreign language,too much would be achieved as a result. Maintaining local language and culture should be prioritised to country, a rich world heritage for future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32126696833 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77434980682 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.936947641 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207549620347 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793839521848 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107340937007 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144238796933 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112597178608 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.