The bar graphs give information about what British students did after graduation( excepting full-time employment) in 2008. Overall, the majority of graduates and postgraduates continued their studies, whereas the smallest number of them did a voluntary job.
According to the first graph, more than 29.665 graduates prefer further study, whereas only 3500 students were involved in voluntary activities. Graduates who has part-time work has the second greatest number(17.735), which is almost the same number as those who were unemployed (16.235).
The second diagram shows that similar to gradu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71812080537 4.54256449028 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79483265878 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3230215023 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.5 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24838132327 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115093828405 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711979462741 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181446667802 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700768212384 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 8.71597938144 182% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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