There are a lot of advantages of using mobile phone such as people can using it instead of bring boring for a whole day.We can using mobile phone for contact to others people such as our friend family.... or they use it to complete their position in a work. firstly people use it for playing online game some other use it for studies instead of their books. in addition we're also use it to check an online business for the employee or we can watch a movie too so there's no need for go to the cinema .
Alternatively, there's also an disadvantages of using mobile phone for a whole they. Using mobile phone is not good for people eye.first of all some of them using their mobile for a whole day spending it on a social network or playing online game and its will make their grade comes to worst. furthermore most of people spending a lot of time on using mobile phone is around 10-17 years old.Moreover they're some of an anonymous also use it for hacking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...instead of bring boring for a whole day.We can using mobile phone for contact to o...
^^
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
... of bring boring for a whole day.We can using mobile phone for contact to others peop...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...t to complete their position in a work. firstly people use it for playing online game s...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... it for studies instead of their books. in addition we apos;re also use it to chec...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... for studies instead of their books. in addition we apos;re also use it to check an onli...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...here apos;s no need for go to the cinema . Alternatively, there apos;s also an...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... . Alternatively, there apos;s also an disadvantages of using mobile phone for...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an disadvantage' or simply 'disadvantages'?
Suggestion: an disadvantage; disadvantages
... . Alternatively, there apos;s also an disadvantages of using mobile phone for a whole they....
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...s will make their grade comes to worst. furthermore most of people spending a lot of time o...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...s will make their grade comes to worst. furthermore most of people spending a lot of time o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...their grade comes to worst. furthermore most of people spending a lot of time on using mobile ...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... mobile phone is around 10 17 years old.Moreover they apos;re some of an anonymous also ...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... mobile phone is around 10 17 years old.Moreover they apos;re some of an anonymous also ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36612021858 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36751382084 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3143152302 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151592200097 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871561206217 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879758747059 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130896151762 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263738918757 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.