Some people think the only purpose to work hard is to earn money.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
As money has always been the source to buy everything, some people tend to believe the only reason to work hard is to be financially sound. Although, associating hard work with money is not ethical for some. In my view, hard work is completely one’s choice and should not be considered as a reason to earn more.
Firstly, for being laborious, it is not always about money. This is because money cannot buy everything and being passionate about the task outweighs the monetary benefit associated with it. Even if, for some hard work means more money, for others it is all about their passion for the job. To illustrate, Philanthropist or Social activist, who works for the upliftment of society, does not care about the fiscal benefits associated with that task. In fact, for them it is all about giving back to the society without any personal gain.
Secondly, sometime hard work is also done to improve their skills in order to remain at the top of their trade. However, in this competitive environment, sometimes hard work; in terms of practice, is the demand. For examples, athletes, who competes on various stages, often practice a lot on their physical fitness and skills. Furthermore, Engineers and doctors tend to upgrade their knowledge in their respective field, which demands lots of hard work. In contrast, if hard work is not the key, then could leave behind in the race.
To sum up, despite some people think the reason for hard work is money, nonetheless many believe to be working hard for their passion and on themselves. To me, hard work is the key to succeed in life. Some people work hard because for them being successful is paramount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in contrast, in fact, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5640315735 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1284044889 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256062664537 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105283303411 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703818422647 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184418469734 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744867938913 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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