Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertising, is a key tool for companies to market their product.When used strategically this can being a lot of revenue to a comapany. Anything from a pencil to car need to be
advertised to reach targeted customers. Even though advertising is an important strategy for companies it could sometime feel over whelming for customers. However in my opinion ,
while i believe advertising great for companies, I agree that advertising can push customers to buy products they wouldn't buy otherwise or even push customers to buy things
they really don't need.
With regards to the customer, the impact of advertising has been determental. Companies do advertising not only on the new products but on the items that are on sale. These advertisements
price goods at such low prices that an individual is inclined to buy something they really don't need. Motor-vehicle companies for example, Advertise cars for 0$ down at 0% interest on some
costly vehicles that an average middle class person would not be able to afford or get a 0% interest on. These advertisements will encourage customers to buy a diminishing good at a higher
price even though they cannot afford it. Advertising, mainly tele advertising is designed in a way to keep users on their toes by giving good deals for a limited time. This will push a customer to take decisions
with out thinking it through and take a hasty decision of buying a product which he/she wouldnt buy otherwise.
To Conclude, although advertising has been key for lot of companies. It has determental effects on customers mainly low and average income familes that fall into the trap of companies
giving great deals for limited time. These advertisings push customers to take decesions hastily causing them to buy products they would normally avoid. One should always be vary of every
advertising they see or read before coming to a decesion on buying the product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s they would normally avoid. One should always be vary of every advertising they see or read...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, really, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05047318612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90861464616 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0768385671 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21147832688 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840751714876 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542643651577 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957161741449 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583494177705 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.