The use of social media, (example Facebook and Twitter), Is replacing face to face contact with many people.
Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
It is irrefutable that the introduction of social media like twitter and facebook by technology in our society has made a huge impact on our lives. The excess use of these platforms is substituting the practical presence of the person with each other. In my opinion, the benefits of social networks are evidently at large levels as compare to its drawbacks, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
A predominant reason is global interaction. With the easy use of such technical tools by the common man has made the whole world a small region without boundaries in between. For instance, on Facebook, everyone can comment on the public issues irrespective of its location, religion or colour. This shows a great example of being democratic, in which people are allowed to talk freely without any discrimination. In addition to that, the person can express his own personal feeling openly in public discuss his notions about society concerns and debate on them.
On the other side, there are some limitations as well, like excess hours spend on these platforms results into addiction to such sites and make people isolated from society. Free time of day utilize on such sites keep the person away from his own family and relatives problems and care. Furthermore, the physical fitness is effected of those who have more interest in such sites, as they dedicate their most of the time to these platforms.
In conclusion, the need for openness and control of discrimination offence is high in demand in the community, thus these applications are quite beneficial to the current world. Moreover, the adverse effects can be controlled by some steps like time management activity. Hence, the advantages of such sites outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83002939172 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0354292411 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967871600723 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331109619959 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417770109202 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577187444211 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486974121776 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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