Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste?

It is irrefutable to say that recycling our waste is a big problem these days. Some people believe that others are not doing enough for recycling waste and that the government should bring in some strict laws regarding recycling of waste, while others argue that bringing laws will not improve this situation and every individual should consider recycling of waste as their responsibility. I am inclined to believe that the government bringing useful laws would be a plus, and I shall discuss factors strengthening my argument while analyzing both the advantages and disadvantages of it.

First and foremost, the government should find problems people are facing while recycling their waste. Laws should be made to ensure that everyone separates solid and wet waste and door to door campaigns should be launched to pick up these separated wastes and people who don't separate their waste should be penalized. This will bring a sense of awareness among people and would lead to better results.

However, just making laws will not have any effect, ultimately every individual should understand their responsibility towards society and help the government in enforcing these laws.

To recapitulate, I pen down saying that the government should bring positive and useful laws to fight the menace of recycling waste problem and everyone should help the government in proper enforcement of these laws.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, regarding, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29596412556 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74059645141 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1864349467 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.625 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466650707578 0.242375264174 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205331231093 0.0925447433944 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115396888623 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278218528791 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111986946264 0.0609392437508 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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