comics
<span id="docs-internal-guid-37d76b1c-7fff-e499-1510-f2915a01ab14"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.295;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">In the reading and the listening both were about the origin of comic, if it was classified as an American art or if it was really originate from America.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.295;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">First, in the reading part, the author claim that comics are originated from America and then it spread to the whole world influencing other country like Japan in the case of Manga and Europe because of Disney comics.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.295;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">But in the listening part, the man talking said that this is not true, and started first talking about the first comic strip, Hogans Alley, negating that it was the first comic strip in the world and mentioned country from Europe that first stared to create comic strip, country like England or Hungary. After this he mention about Action comic, the character Super man, saying that he was not the first character from a comic book and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book created 60 years before Super man, also he add the nationality of the creator of Super man that was Canadian to complement his argument. </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.295;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">In addition to this the man declare that Japanese manga were influenced maindly by traditional Asian art</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.295;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">Finally he answered about the Disney comic in Europe, letting us know that the Disney character were created by American but, the comic on Europe were drawn by themselves. In conclusion comics is not influenced by American at all but having origin all around the world.</span></p><br></span>
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- Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to su 78
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- Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housi 68
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- lectures or discussion 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
^^^^^^^^^Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'originated'.
Suggestion: originated
... as an American art or if it was really originate from America.
Line 1, column 1673, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... like England or Hungary. After this he mention about Action comic, the character...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1822, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Ten
...comic book and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1831, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...k and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book cre...
^^
Line 1, column 1913, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
...ated 60 years before Super man, also he add the nationality of the creator of Super...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1373.03311258 195% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 8.05705705706 5.08290768461 159% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5489182418 2.5805825403 409% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432432432432 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 419.366225166 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.55342163355 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 21.2450331126 391% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 592.022592474 49.2860985944 1201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 670.75 110.228320801 609% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.25 21.698381199 384% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06452816374 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140700140012 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14521196118 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640015375959 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140700140012 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.2 13.3589403974 436% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.07 53.8541721854 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 5.55761589404 426% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.6 11.0289183223 377% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.65 12.2367328918 250% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.42419426049 130% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 75.0 10.7273730684 699% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.498013245 335% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.2008830022 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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