The graph below show the differences in wheat exports over three different areas
The graph describes the amount of wheat which was sold by Australia, Canada and the European Community in the period from 1985 to 1990.
At the beginning in 1985, the highest number of wheat exports belonged to Canada, about 19 millions of tons, while the figure in European Community and Australia was 16 millions of tons and 15 millions of tons respectively. In the next year, the number of selling wheat in Australia rose slightly, about 1 million tons. Meanwhile, Canada and the European Community experienced a slight fall in the number of wheat exports, approximately 16 millions of tons and 14 millions of tons respectively compared to the previous year.
From 1986 to 1988, there was an upward trend in both Canada and the European Community. The graph of Canada climbed rapidly to the position of 25 millions of tons while it was only a gradual increase in European Community, from 14 millions of tons to 15 millions of tons. In contrast, Australia suffered a steady drop in the number of wheat exports, nearly 4 millions of tons in three years. In the last three years, European Community achieved significant growth, over 20 millions of tons in 1990 while both Australia and Canada showed a downward trend, especially when Canada reached at the bottom, about 14 millions of tons in 1989.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '19 million'.
Suggestion: 19 million
...wheat exports belonged to Canada, about 19 millions of tons, while the figure in European Comm...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '16 million'.
Suggestion: 16 million
...in European Community and Australia was 16 millions of tons and 15 millions of tons respective...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...d Australia was 16 millions of tons and 15 millions of tons respectively. In the next year, th...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '16 million'.
Suggestion: 16 million
... number of wheat exports, approximately 16 millions of tons and 14 millions of tons respective...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '14 million'.
Suggestion: 14 million
..., approximately 16 millions of tons and 14 millions of tons respectively compared to the previ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '25 million'.
Suggestion: 25 million
...nada climbed rapidly to the position of 25 millions of tons while it was only a gradual increa...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '14 million'.
Suggestion: 14 million
...al increase in European Community, from 14 millions of tons to 15 millions of tons. In contras...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
... Community, from 14 millions of tons to 15 millions of tons. In contrast, Australia suffered a...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
... in the number of wheat exports, nearly 4 millions of tons in three years. In the last three ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...unity achieved significant growth, over 20 millions of tons in 1990 while both Australia and C...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '14 million'.
Suggestion: 14 million
...hen Canada reached at the bottom, about 14 millions of tons in 1989.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88738738739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67073055935 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454954954955 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0946465806 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869421892369 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506095488211 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288943979808 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713467245146 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116678445967 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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