it is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from variety of social bacgrounds mix with each other at school
Usual class at the school has a diverse status background. There are some children with intelligence abilities while others are not. There are also some kids with a wealth background whereas others are poor. Occasionally the parent has a perspective about their kid society. Several of them do not want their son and girl mix with the children in different status. However, I believe that to make children have social and right behavior by letting them to associate with other children in the school.
To begin with, in the school, the child actually does not live alone. Certainly, he/she has a lot of friends. The kids usually do not have the same parent occupation. Some among them are doctor while some others are teacher or soldier or farmer or maybe have not an occupation like unemployment. Not only the parent background that they have, but also they have diverse abilities. Moreover, to avoid children from having a social-interest character is by letting them know and associating with other kids. No matter whether they are rich or poor, whether they are smart or not, they still able to be friend. It is important thing to bring them distinguishing how big this world. As a consequence, they may become a social, good, and intellect human. It is because they have more knowledge and experience about entire world.
On the other hand, the parent does not always ensure the children about the positive side from varied societies in the school, because not all friends have a good thought and behavior. The parent should be aware not very free let their kids. For example, some kids have a bad habit in their behavior, such as smoking, play a lot, and other children which have a good and sweet character.
In addition, the children actually are soft human. They easily follow others behave, because they are still dependent humans. Sometimes, the kids cannot distinguish what a good action or not. Thus, the parent, teacher and old people responsibility is to teach them the positive side and give them advice.
In a nutshell, mix with others in the school is important to give experience atmosphere in their life. However, to learn them about the fact social life is also crucial. The parent should not really give them the freedom. They must choose and know the positive or negative side they need to follow or to avoid. Therefore, good society and behavior will bring the children to the beautiful life in the future.
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The parent should be aware not very free let their kids.
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to make children have social and right behavior
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It is important thing
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