Some people argue higher taxes shuld be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution,whereas others argue there are better ways to deal it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this working era, these industrial units are very beneficial to masses until it started pollution. Due to which, some folks think that pollution sourcing factories should be taxed whilst "there is another method to overcome this situation "assert others.Before coming to conclusion, the essay will decipher both convictions and my vision in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the view of the people who strongly believe huge taxation ought to be imposed to manufacturing by the sake of,in that case, they would not be ready to endow it. The reason those, the fabrications may shut down. Secondly,by charging to productions, could force them to use non-contaminated mechanisms. To exemplify, the article of eminent newspaper 'The Times' has statical data which contains that 81.3% premises turn their old machines into new one by the following action of governing authorities.
In spite of this, there are some who have differ views with same, they opine that to solve this issue. There are many factors can be introduced such as building some acts that are relevance to ambience. For illustration, the recent survey of 2019 results out the Prime Minister of India has launched 'no more pollution' law under which over creating adulteration mills will not allow to get licence.
To end,the contenders of both outlooks have innumerable points to base their arguments on it and are to some extent right in their own perspectives.According to me,yet, it would be best to choose differ techniques and not toll system
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, second, secondly, so, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21862348178 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01739779811 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696356275304 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8587145602 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119990517997 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396453235351 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353698726016 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640597380172 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191090837718 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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