Essay topics:
Describe a friend
I have a high school friend and her name is Rachel. The first day I met her at staircase, i asked her about her class and realized we were classmate. She was a good student so she been the best student in my class all the times. She learnt English very well, however, she needed more practicing in writing skill.
In her free time, she liked reading books on the computer, listening to music and practicing her English with her friends. Recently, her plan is improve her English and visit to new locations as much as possible. In the end, she's a good friend in my life.
Votes
This essay topic by users
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-03 | Pheeps | view | |
| 2023-02-28 | dingfeng240298 | 11 | view |
| 2022-10-27 | Sarina2021 | 61 | view |
| 2021-09-26 | golemzzz2006 | 49 | view |
| 2021-09-21 | Tran Thi My Linh | 56 | view |
Essay Categories
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... The first day I met her at staircase, i asked her about her class and realized ...
^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...with her friends. Recently, her plan is improve her English and visit to new locations ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...ations as much as possible. In the end, shes a good friend in my life.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 466.0 1615.20841683 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 315.596192385 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35514018692 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32257563619 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 176.041082164 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644859813084 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 136.8 506.74238477 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1607079489 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601636848279 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482142655794 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763261651219 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518295048209 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00404183354603 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.