You have read in your local newspaper that there has been an increase in the amount of crime committed by young people.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In you letter
* explain what crimes are common in your area
* say why you think young people are committing these crimes
* suggest what you think should be done about this problem
Write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter as follows:
To the Editor
To the Editor
I am writing in response to your story about crime. In Pinrang, there has also been a considerable rise in the number of burglaries. In fact, last night, several houses in the main street where my cousin lives were broken by man who also lives in that town. That man also already took several jewelries and money, and he did it with helping gosh that is better known Tuyul. Because of it, societies in that place were shocking, and that thief still stays because there is no one knows about who did it.
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