There is a saying which states" stand up, and salute the teacher because a teacher is almost a profit" These words mean a lot to somebody who raised so many generations. However, nowadays , we don;t hear much about respect to teachers. In my opinion, teachers lost so much of their value and that is because of the reasons that I am going to address in my essay.
First, teachers nowadays are paid relatively less than in the past. A decent income would allow teachers to be valued and respected. In the past, teachers were one of the highest paid employees in the community. However, nowadays, teachers have more hardships, and sometimes they can barely pay their rent. For instance, two months ago, there was an article in 'San Francisco Chronicle" about a teachers who was unable to pay for rent in the city of San Francisco. The Mayer intervene to build more houses to encourage people to join this profession. Thus, improving the income of teachers would significantly improve their image in the community.
Moreover, teachers have less authorization to decide the faith of students whether to pass or fail. In the past teachers were granted full authority to evaluate students and make judgments about their destiny. However, nowadays more regulations are in place to withhold teachers from taking critical decisions solely on personal judgment. partly, because of a change in responsibilities. Therefore, they lost being stakeholders in the decision process.
Finally, technology has changed the way students are learning. In the past learners were attending classes and interacting more with teachers in classes. On the other hand, today, there are more online courses where students do not need to attend lectures physically. This new type of education lead to a decrease in the level of communication between students and the teachers. Surprisingly, students need no more to attend classes. As result, this new trend of teaching has devalued teachers as a corner-stone person in the educational process.
In conclusion, teachers are still being admired by their students, however, they lost some weight in the community. Partly, because of Technology which has changed the learning process, and the economic situation which hastily influenced teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d so many generations. However, nowadays , we don;t hear much about respect to tea...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
... in San Francisco Chronicle' about a teachers who was unable to pay for rent in the c...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Partly
... decisions solely on personal judgment. partly, because of a change in responsibilitie...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsibilities. Therefore, they lost being stakeholders in the decision process. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92187124663 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552197802198 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9417197458 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.652173913 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8260869565 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236678262216 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659154601175 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583128357831 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114693750633 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582791570625 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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