It is often observed that the big designations like the director of companies or leadership are entitled to the aged or experienced people. However, a certain set of people are in favor of young adults to be promoted for such positions. I strongly believe that juveniles are capable enough to hold these responsibilities, further both views will be discussed in this essay.
To embark with, from antiquity we have seen many exemplary leaders like Alexander, Akbar, Napolian to name a few who marked their ventures in history at a very young age. Hence, it makes clear that leadership has nothing to do with ages. Apart from this, with the advancement of modern technology, today's generation has acquaintance with the factors that make these specific positions valuable in organizations. Furthermore, they are equally capable of taking critical decisions and analyze circumstances similar to older ones. In a recent piece of article by prominent "The Time", around eighty percent of college students preparing themselves for the challenging market. Certainly, trendsetters like Mark Zuckerberg, Eon Musk and many more are the inspiration for the aspiring pupils.
On the other hand, people have faith that with age the experience also grow, which help directors to understand the organization structure enough to perform any step without hesitation. Surely, the perks are there with age, but in the fast-paced changing market risks are high, vulnerabilities are apparent and success is not guaranteed. Moreover, adult leaders are risk takers, this virtue of them opens opportunities for profits. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around fifty percent of organizations around the world prefer to have young working force because of their skills and deliberate nature. Consequently, it creates an area of improvement, also it is for the betterment of our society.
To conclude, it is a myth that only older ones are eligible to obtain high designations in organizations. In current time many companies have already understood the value to young mind and energy, which are also providing better opportunities for them.
- You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.describe your courseexpress your feelings about the coursegive suggestions regarding what the university should do 89
- You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement 89
- You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say– What is the reason?– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?– S 73
- You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say– What is the reason?– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?– S 73
- You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say– What is the reason?– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?– S 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46470588235 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13298667988 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2535983279 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157733358453 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454071277071 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404017987122 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930161321074 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392066755699 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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