Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars .
To what extent do you agree ?
In this modern era, it is disapproval that crime is one of the challenging issue from many years and governing authorities are always endeavouring to make its increased rate slow by punishing and putting criminals into jails. However, some have notion government should engage certain prisoners in communal services. This essay explains approval convictions up to limited extant before arriving at conclusion.
To begin with, to throw a light on people's view. Firstly,if some culprits get chance to undertake social tasks, positive changes can be seen in their behaviour such as, by doing street cleaning, collecting household items for the homeless families, assisting disabled and old persons and many more activities like that would lead them to do welfare of the society.Secondly, cycle of offending may be reduced by introducing these practices to the law-breaker.
Thirdly, despite of getting certain offenders into captivity, government must provoke them to get theirselves busy in public works by sake of, their name would not be listed in criminal records which eligible them to get jobs down the line.Nextly, it is necessary to being penalised for those prisoners by virtue of, there are some serious crimes just like murders, rape, and so on, which can not forbidden. The reason whose, they have to accept penalty for that.
To end, it is best way to create peace in the society by diverting criminals' mind towards public practices and to manifest the kindness from their inside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79314637401 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691666666667 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.529342792 49.4020404114 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.5 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163842107778 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054544332491 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566157761245 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078497813111 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517775433422 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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