You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain the situation
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing to express how annoyed I am with the way your company is treating me.
I was recently employed as a digital photographer at a media company and one of my requirements is a camera which I recently purchased for your company. I brought the device from your company because you carried the brand I was interested in and also the fact that you offered aftermarket services. However, this is not the case.
Firstly, the device was purchase a week ago and when I return home, unbox and tested it, I encounter some functionality issues. I decided to return it on the very next day was told by one of the salesperson that the device will be diagnose and repaired and I can collect it by two business days
Secondly, it’s been a week and I was told the device is still not repaired and quite frankly I am very much annoyed. The device has a warranty period and I do not understand why I can get a replacement.
I am kindly requesting an update on the device and if the device cannot be repaired I will like a new one or a full refund.
I await your response with an immediate solution.
Kind regards
Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, frankly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41037735849 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6774966058 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0875158174 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166289756809 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541145752411 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612281804675 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688304274596 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639013123668 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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