Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial skills or should they promote education first?
there is no doubt that developing countries are flourishing day by day in every field. some people think that developing countries should focus on the industrial skills but some think that education is more important. in this essay, i will discuss both viewpoint and i will give my opinion.
first and foremost, advanced countries should focus on the industrial skills because countries progress depends on the industries to produce the raw and final material and then supply it in different area of the world. it will open the various opportunities to earn more money to the country on the worldwide base.
moreover, if the people will have these skill they will get jobs in the industries. it will improve the living standard of the people. they will no need to travel out of the country to earn their livings.
on the other hand, some people have other perceptions about the education. education plays a vital role to improve a human from all aspect of the life. if a person will be highly educated then he will be more aware about the rule and regulation about the industries and he/she will have the knowledge how they have to work safely within the big machines. furthermore, properly educated person will have more ideas to improve the productivity in the limited time and with the limited sources. moreover developing countries should pay much attention on education to improve the country more and better way.
by hammering the final nail, i think education is more important rather than focusing on the industrial skills and education will help to broaden the horizon the people and will open a varsity of ways to get more opportunities in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, as to, i think, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 4.92783505155 345% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97879858657 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59814169099 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491166077739 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 290.88556701 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8153457693 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315131432191 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115913483162 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103671149909 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185278680494 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604226803249 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.